Monday, January 14, 2013

Her House on the Shore



My
Ma made me
Promise that I’d
Try my best in school.
And always give it my all,
Even when I thought it was too
Hard or I couldn’t do it. I promised I
Would go to college and make a name for
Myself. She made me promise to get a good job.
One where I could not only make a lot of money. But
I could make a difference. I could help people. I promised her
That I would buy her a big house out on the shore. A place she could
Relax. Take a break. Reflect on all the good that she had done. So I did. I gave
My best and worked really hard. I got a good job helping people. I even bought a big
                         House out on the shore. It had a wide wrap around porch with two white
                         Rocking chairs out front. There were three bedrooms so she could invite
                         Her friends and family over for visits whenever she wanted. The view was
                         My favorite part because the sun rose right over the water. The beams of
                         Light licked the water gently;  they jumped  from                     place to place.
                         There was a big yard full of  oak samplings and a                    giant sycamore
                         Tree.  It even had a sweet  little garden tucked  in                    one side  that
                         she could  grow her famous tomatoes in and plant                   her pumpkins.
                         I knew right  when I bought it that mama would love the little flowerbeds.
                         She was known for planting beautiful yellow marigolds come each spring.
                         But I bet  that Mama’s  favorite                                  would be the kitchen.
                         She loved  to make cakes,  pies                                  and pastries. She also
                         made the  absolute best  roast                                     beef anyone ever had.
                         It made my mouth  water with                                    every bite. Now she
                         Could entertain and have all of                                   the parties with all the
                         Neighbors  like she  wanted to.                                  Only, my Mama never
                         Saw the house I bought for her.                                  She passed away last
                         Winter. She fought her hardest                                   and gave it her all, but
                         Not even my college degree or                                  ‘good job’ could stop
                         The cancer from spreading. At                                   first I was upset. Angry.
                         Unforgiving. But now I see that                                  this house is more than
                         Brick or stone. It is a chance to                                  thank her for what she
                         Taught me. It is a chance to help                               others. It is her memory.                                   

1 comment:

  1. Wow, just wow. I love the way the text structure reflects the poem. This was a great experimental step. Keep up the stellar ideas!

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